Alec
Shane of PatsPulpit shines as a superior
writer that “gets” the fan perspective in his piece, “Coping with Loss: Giants Edition.”
Shane shrewdly
begins, "Ugh. I don't even know what else to say here.
This is absolutely brutal."
With the reader hooked, he goes on:
With the reader hooked, he goes on:
I know I'm supposed to think of five
positives that we can all use to hold us together moving forward. …But the
bottom line is that I'm not feeling very optimistic at all right now... What I really want to do is go on
an angry fan rant where I just start spouting profanity associated with poor
decision-making and failed execution…I want to harp on the turnovers and call
out Julian Edelman..."
It’s
noteworthy that Shane can put the event in the context of a bigger
picture. Shane continues:
“I know it hurts, and the manner in
which the Patriots lost makes everything seem a lot worse than it is, but in
all honesty it really wasn't that bad.
The Pats are just in a little bit of a slump right now…. They have played their
worst football of the season in back-to-back games, lost a game at home for the
first time since the Carter administration, and dredged up memories of the
worst day of many Patriots fans' lives.”
Props
are due to Shane for not necessarily telling the reader what he wants to hear. However, while some might enjoy Shane’s refreshingly
candid take, others will ask, “What about an Authority?” It’s a good question that’s answered by none
other than Pat Ouellette of the National
Football Authority.
Ouellette
should get high marks because while it is easy for a writer to say there is a
problem, it takes a incisive and gifted writer to both tackle and frame the
problem.
First,
Ouellette lays out the matter as he sees it:
“Brady did not deal well with the
defensive pressure and was often indecisive and inaccurate.”
Then,
Ouellette shrewdly and courageously follows up--most likely with the support with
the intrepid folks at The Authority—with
what he sees as the cause of the problem.
As
Ouellette tells it:
“…both of
Brady’s interceptions were the result of him forcing passes into a small window
that enabled Giant defenders to make a play on the ball."
In a clever move, Ouellette lets the reader decide
the cause of Brady being forced to pass into this “small window.” Then, while the reader ponders the answer, he
snaps close the trap.
“…when
he’s human as he was last night
against New York, the Patriots’ margin for error becomes even slimmer.”
Happy tailgating to both journalists and Giants fans
alike.
(For the complete articles, please go to PatsPulpit or to National Football Authority.)
(For the complete articles, please go to PatsPulpit or to National Football Authority.)
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